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Sunday, April 8, 2012

The Song of Gaál - Eight


*** Warning ***
Sensitive situations
Violence; Nudity;
Hard R Rating
Please do not read if you are easily disturbed.
(All characters, places and events reside solely in my imagination.)

The Song of Gaál
…....... Eight ….......


Cassava found that the infant that Malika claimed as her own offered him respite from Malika's constant observation. While he was not allowed to leave her side, he was allowed to read a book as he waited for her to want his attention. Ursula would come to the nursery during the day and Malika would respond by screaming at her and pushing her away until Levente came to the room. Levente would take Malika's arms and remind her that Ursula was the wet-nurse and all proper Ladies used them. Malika would calm slightly and begrudgingly hand over Eszerbet. She would then pull Cassava up by his arm and push past Levente, leaving the room in an angry flurry. Levente watched Cassava's dark head as it disappeared from the room behind Malika, his eyes filled with bitterness.



In the library, Cassava stood before Malika while she looked into the fire. Levente sat with a book on his lap, watching the boy. Cassava shifted slightly and kept his eyes averted, feeling Levente's stare bore into his skin and making his spine race with chills.

  

He heard steps on the front stair and breathed deeply a sigh of relief when Jaszef begins to speak to Levente. Levente rose and approached Malika. “Malika, it is time to put your pet away, it is late. Go to bed.” The two men stood by as Malika led Cassava from the room. 



Cassava followed Malika down to his cellar room. He stood inside the door as she closed it, leaving him in darkness. He listened for the bolt to slide through the channels and after his eyes adjusted, he moved to his bed to sleep.  

Cassava woke from a deep sleep, his senses tingling. He lay covered in the quilts, listening intently to the dark room and the castle above him. Uncertain what brought him awake, he relaxed into the bedding and tried to regain sleep. Moments passed and again he is alert, having heard a sound on the step. His back to the door, he wonders if it is morning so soon and Malika has come for him. He began to move from the bedding when the door burst open admitting Levente.  In a blind fit of jealous rage, Levente advanced on Cassava, kicking his back and running a long dagger through his chest, leaving him to bleed out his life in the cold, dank cellar.  


Levente then moved to the kitchen and ordered a serving girl to rouse the Mistress from bed, her pet was dead. As the girl ran to complete her errand, Levente returned to the cellar and kicked Cassava's abdomen, eliciting a weak groan from the boy that brought a cruel smile to Levente's lips. Cassava curled into himself, rolling onto his side. Levente kicked once more, his booted heel to Cassava's head, then the Master of Castle Sotete turned and left the cellar.


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Malika flew through the castle from her chambers to the cellars, running down the stone stair, unmindful for the slippery damp that covered each step. Seeing Cassava curled on the floor in a pool of blood, the Mistress threw herself down beside his unmoving form, her nightclothes soaking up the life spilling from Cassava. 'Surely he is dead!', she thinks. Distraught with grief, Malika closed her eyes, quickly turning Cassava over. She hears a weak gasp and knowing the sound to be Cassava's, her eyes widen. 'He is not dead! Hurry! Hurry!' She shouts to the girl, 'Fetch Kisertet! Bring him here now!', she orders, her eyes darting to the girl as the girl bounds up the stair.  



Her attention turned back to Cassava, she pulls the jumper off of him and slaps at his cheeks, calling his name, watching his throat work as he swallows and struggles for each short, gasping breath. 'Open your eyes, `Sava, open them! You will not die, I will not allow you to die,' Malika growls, '..`Sava, you are mine.' Whether her words are heard or not, Cassava continues to struggle to survive. Had he command of his thoughts, he would certainly be seeking his freedom in death.  He was not aware of being lifted and carried from the cellar.  


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Fevered eyes dart side to side beneath swollen lids as heat sears through the boy's veins. Cassava whimpers in pain and mumbles incomprehensible words as his weak arms struggle against a coverlet. His battered frame sinks further into the soft bedding he lies upon.

'He is waking,' Malika states, then casts a questioning glance at the man sitting on the bed at the boy's side.

'No.' Kisertet replies without a look at Malika. 'He is dying.' Kisertet continues to dampen the cloth in the tepid water and wipe the boy's brow, watching the grimace relax and return with each pass of cloth to skin.

Malika cast an angry stare at Kisertet and moved before him to force his eyes to meet her own. 'Save him,' she bluntly commanded, causing Kisertet to become completely still. He raised his eyes to Malika's and watched the face that he knew so well. Kisertet gently snorted and returned his attention to the dying boy. 'Now why would I do that, Mistress?' emphasising the last word. Kisertet is stunned when Malika drops to her knees before him, her hands holding his legs and her face turned up to his. 'You are the only one who can. We waste precious moments, save him, Kisertet.' Malika pleads.



Disgusted, Kisertet pushes Malika's hands from his legs and rapidly stands, walking around the bed and to the window. He keeps his back to her, his ears alert to the shallow, uneven breaths from the boy. 'You cannot let him die, Kisertet!' Malika wails, dropping back on her bottom to sit on the floor. Kisertet spins around with the force of a whirlwind and stares at Malika. 'Why, Malika?' he asks bitterly, 'so you can abuse the boy more, so Levente can torture him more? What do you want with him, Malika? What sort of sick hell have you put this boy through, dear sister?' he sneers. 'Surely you have the means to cure him yourself!' 



Kisertet's angry tirade leaves him breathing heavily and he watches Malika with sour distaste as her hands cover her eyes and her sobs fill the room. His eyes catch the gleam of the fire reflected from the gemstone of Malika's ring and his face clenched in a tight angry snarl. 'Get out,' Kisertet tells her, his soft voice belying the anger he holds in close control. When she does not move fast enough and looks at him questioningly, he loses patience. Swiftly moving to Malika, Kisertet grabs her arm and pulls her to her feet, shoving her to the door, 'Out!' he bellows, pushing her through the door and closing it as Malika falls forward on the other side. He slams the bolt across, locking himself in the room with the boy, and makes his way back to the bed.




28 comments:

  1. I hope the boy doesn't die but why would she torture the boy like she does? Kisertet seems to care for the boy and wants to help

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  2. Interesting turn of events. Why would Levente attempt to kill him if only to warn his wife soon enough to save him? Wouldn't he wait until he is dead or very nearly dead?

    I wouldn't have expected that kind of emotion from Mistress. At that moment she seemed to almost care about him which is a contrast to everything she's done to him since his arrival. Kisertet was right in questioning her motives for wanting to save him. I would like to know that answer myself.

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    1. I hope the interesting is a good thing :)
      Levente expects Cassava's death. I had "her pet was dead" rather than ill, but changed it. Do you think I should change it back? When Levente left, Cassava was still sort of breathing. Thanks for reading and all of your feedback is greatly appreciated, it helps me tell a story better :)

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  3. How terrible. To be woken up like that. I hope her brother will help him now. I hope if he survives that Malika would she her own wicked ways and changes for the better. I wonder how these two people became so twisted. I got the feeling she can't have her own kids and punishes and obsessive loves other kids for it.

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    1. I never really know how to respond because I am so afraid of giving things away. haha.
      Thank you for reading, I hope you're liking it :)

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    2. I do! Like it very much :)

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  4. This chapter broke my heart. With so many adults in the house, two sane ones I can think of right this minute, what happened to Cassy should never have happened, I don't understand how Kistert and Ursula could have let things get this far. It's not right, it's unjust and it's cruel. If something happens to Cassy Kistert and Ursula will be just as guilty as Malika and her mean ass husband.

    Beautiful, heartbreaking screenshots and equally breathtaking writing.

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    1. I am glad I am able to evoke emotion with both words and pictures. Thanks so very much for reading, in spite of the rather twisted nature of the story.
      Kisertet has pretty much stayed away. Ursula is a servant. Jaszef lives in the stable, with the boy Malek, so they don't see as much. Malika doesn't often allow or have Cassava in the areas of the castle where the servants are. Beata runs from Cassava. The picture with her has to be one of my favourites. She looks so shocked.

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  5. Poor Cassava, how much more must he endure? I'm actually very surprised at Malika's reaction. All she does is abuse him and is mean to him, how could she possibly care for him? Lavente has big issues, he needs to be treated as he treats others....edenz~

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    1. Thanks for reading, Edenz. Malika adores her pet. ^_^
      Levente is scary, isn't he?

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  6. Cassava can't die! Although death would be a release from the horrible life that he leads. Maybe almost losing him and her brother's words will make Malika treat him better now!

    I can't believe how cruel Levente was. How could he do that to that baby! It's Malika he should hate!

    His defense of Ursula makes me think even more that the baby is his. He is not a kind man, and I don't think that he would care about the baby otherwise!

    The pictures were really good, Zhippidy!

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    1. A toast to you for reading :) I am glad you're interested.
      And I know, Cassava is quite an unfortunate boy :(
      Thanks for liking the pictures :) ((I forgot to fix Kisertet's foot, it looks like he's going to break his left ankle when he picks up Cassava. Ouchies. heh))

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  7. Well it is quite clear that Malika is crazy, now more than ever at least. She doesn't even care for Cassava as a pet, no one that cares for a pet treats them as she has Cassava. He's more like a toy to her and she is crying over a broken toy as a child would.

    As for Levente, I'm not surprised but I do wonder why he did that.

    I wonder if Kisertet's tirade will make Malika see things differently.

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    1. I agree, Cassava is more a possession than a child to be cared for.
      Levente is scary.
      Thanks so much for reading. :)
      I think I am going to borrow your idea and make some maps. They will come in very handy just for me even. ^_^

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    2. Oh I think you should. They will come in handy, I know they have for me in my story.

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  8. What the hell is wrong with Levente? Cassava has been there for years and now he goes after him? What happened between Levente and Malika to make him go nuts like that? I was shocked how someone finally gave it to Malika though. It would have to be her brother though I can't see anyone else stepping to her. Hopefully things change around the castle and hopefully he can save Cassava's life.

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    1. Levente has an irrational, addled mind. His dislike of Cassava grew and grew over the years. It wasn't so much he and Malika, but his conversation with Kisertet that brought the insane notions out, and Malika's rushing past him with Cassava in tow just boiled things over. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)

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  9. I don't Cassava to die! But in a strange sort of way it seems like death is his best option. Especially given the fact that he will most likely only get beaten more.
    It's official. I hate both Levente and Malika.

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    1. Death is peace for some, I think, or so I am told.
      Levente and Malika are very easy to dislike. They think they are ok though. heh.
      Thanks for reading, Bria :)

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  10. Well...I did not see that coming. I understand Levente is jealous, but he caused this on himself when he gave his wife the boy to begin with. I mean, newsflash, boys grow into men!!!

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    1. Levente is an odd character. More to come about him soon :) *fingers crossed*
      Thanks so much for reading.

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  11. I love the way you wrote about a different side to Malika. Her desperation was almost sad to read. She's an interesting character because in this chapter it was clear how much she cares for her pet. She could've easily cut her loss and get another child, but Cassava seems different - one worth crying and grieving over. On the other hand,like Levente, I doubt she'll change her wicked ways after being this close to losing him. And by the skeptical reaction, Kisertet doesn't think so either.This was definitely one of the saddest chapters I've read so far. Great work!

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    1. I love to read peoples' thoughts on the characters and the story itself. It fascinates me how there can be so many different perceptions on the same character or event. You are so right that she could have left Cassava in the cellar and taken another child. There is a care in her, as twisted as she seems.

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  12. Oh, my! This was awful! :-( <---- I mean Levente's cruelty, not the chapter. But what's the matter with these twisted people? Why would Levente want Cassava dead is beyond me, but Malika for once seemed to show some true emotions by her desperate plea to save the child's life. I simply don't know what to make of either of them.

    Great update!

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    1. Levente is a jealous man, Malika a bit cruel, selfish and very childishly spoiled. They are definitely a strange couple. Now they are the ones whose home children would cross the street to avoid. :)
      Thanks for reading, and for your comments :)

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